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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 2:47:41 GMT -5
i'll take that! just missed that 'of her life' thing again, but i can deal with it! next i need: Appearance: which can be done in TWO ways. first is to go to a place like photobucket, find a suitable picture that matches what's stuck in ur head and then just follow simple copy/paste stuff and get it in there. OR explain how she looks from third person. The description has to be lengthly enough to cover: hair style/color, eye color, choices of clothing, and whatever else you think is necessary to explain to give others a good 'painting' of what she looks like. usually pic's work wonders... saves u a lot of typing.. XDXD
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 3:34:06 GMT -5
Name: Amaie Hatacori Age: 27 Gender: female Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times. Bio/orgin/History: For most of her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. When she was first sent to Earth, she had been constantly attacked during her first week there. But she has been able to stand up for herself since, and whenever the time has called for it. Appearance: Well this is the best I could find but is it ok? She looks alot like this. I've drawn Amaie but I cant show you it. T_T (I dont have a scanner)
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 29, 2009 16:02:59 GMT -5
that is such a cute bird. ^^ i like how its wearing a helmet also!! and yes that is fine, and uh... don't have to add that last part in unless you really feel that its needed that badly. now i need: Weapons: and that's it for now!
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 30, 2009 20:37:13 GMT -5
Name: Amaie Hatacori Age: 27 Gender: female Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times. Bio/orgin/History: For most of her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. When she was first sent to Earth, she had been constantly attacked during her first week there. But she has been able to stand up for herself since, and whenever the time has called for it. Appearance: Weapon: just a Hilt. Shes able to send her own enegry throught the hilt to shape any kind of sword she wishes. thats good? I dont think thats Godmoding......I think its creative.
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 30, 2009 22:13:49 GMT -5
indeed. it should make people wonder how best to beat her up.. XDXD
next up.. hmm...
Abilities:
Other:
first one i really don't have to explain tooo much, but stuff like magical skills and nunchuck skills go there... XD
as for 'other' stuff like theme music, quirks, and other stuff that you may have forgotten to add to the other sections. some also use that spot to put down what type of 'moves' that their characters perform, but's more for the battle happy people.. XD
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 30, 2009 22:33:02 GMT -5
Abilities: Heavens Restriction: White lights immoblize the oppent Cure: Heals allies Angel's Fight: Uses energy to attack distance enemies.
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 31, 2009 0:42:12 GMT -5
ok. not bad for the ability section. now how about the 'other' section or if nothing for it, just put N/A. and then add it to the template and see how it looks! ^^
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 31, 2009 0:47:14 GMT -5
Name: Amaie Hatacori Age: 27 Gender: female Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times. Bio/orgin/History: For most of her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. When she was first sent to Earth, she had been constantly attacked during her first week there. But she has been able to stand up for herself since, and whenever the time has called for it. Appearance: Weapon: just a Hilt. Shes able to send her own enegry throught the hilt to shape any kind of sword she wishes. Abilities: Heavens Restriction: White lights immoblize the oppent Cure: Heals allies Angel's Fight: Uses energy to attack distance enemies. Other: N/A Like that?
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 31, 2009 0:51:38 GMT -5
yep! but i need u to fix one litttle itty bitty detail. i need u to somehow put some more space between 'abilities' and the actual title of the first ability. XD some people may get confused the moment their brain tries to read the whole sentance. XP the less confused people can be while reading a template, the better chances you have on getting accepted.
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 31, 2009 1:12:10 GMT -5
Abilities: Heavens Restriction: White lights immoblize the oppent
Cure: Heals allies
Angel's Fight: Uses energy to attack distance enemies.
That work?
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