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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 0:39:22 GMT -5
how the hell did that get there? XD i wanted that to be How are the baby created? or gender... XD
oohh.. i get it.. XD we can't say it outright.. XD
s. e. x. XD is what i meant.. but gender works too.. XDXD
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 0:41:27 GMT -5
XD XDXDXD
Name: Amaie Hatacori
Age: 27
Gender: female
lol ok I see. XP How are the baby created? LOL thats funny XD
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 1:14:59 GMT -5
tis is tis is... XD almost threw me for a loop de loop..XDXD next i'll need this stuff added: Personality: Bio/orgin/History: That one right above this line is demanded by most, for it has to tie into whatever 'theme' the rp wants to create. So it can't be like: She came from the mountains. When the theme is set to be something like a ocean type setting. but for now, just make something up. we can always edit later.
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 1:25:45 GMT -5
Name: Amaie Hatacori
Age: 27
Gender: female
Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times.
Bio/orgin/History: For most her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. Shes gone throught many of battle and is alway victorious.....
I suck but thats just off the top of my head....
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 1:31:13 GMT -5
tis good for now dude! but time for more colors! XD green means it doesn't make sense to me.. XD and orange means 'can't be an absolute' type deal.. XD most people tend to get somewhat upset when u put that kind of language into templates. For how would someone hope to win, if she's ALWAY's been victorious before the rp started? best to put stuff like: And has managed to win quite a few victories. or something... XD get what i'm saying?
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 1:39:02 GMT -5
Yeah I understand but like I said its off the top of my head if I thought about it I wouldn't have put that. XP I always put some form of weakness in it..........
Name: Amaie Hatacori
Age: 27
Gender: female
Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times.
Bio/orgin/History: For most her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. She has been in some battle but never really wanted to kill anyone. When she was on earth she was attacked her first week of there. But shes been able to stand up for herself with the time was needed to be.
Like that?
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 1:51:20 GMT -5
Bio/orgin/History: For most of her life she was in Heaven until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. She has been in some battle's but has never really wanted to kill anyone. When she was on earth is was attacked her first week of there. But shes been able to stand up for herself with the time was needed to be.
getting better, don't mind the blue stuff, as that helps me read the passage better, but it helps to have that there. but that last part.. ugh... fragment sentance's are a english teacher's worse nightmare.. XD and gamer's biggest peeve... XDXD that last part sounds good, but can't be understood very well. might work better along the lines like:
When she was first sent to Earth, she had been constantly attacked during her first week there. But she has been able to stand up for herself since, and whenever the time has called for it.
i know i might sound harsh.. but i was aiming to become a novelist before i changed course and decided to aim for a degree in the video game development area.. XDXD so i have a good sense of words about me.
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 2:15:39 GMT -5
lol I understand........but I suck at Bios tho....
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 2:18:14 GMT -5
no frowing! NONE! XD it makes me sad too to see others frown.. but we'll get it down! u've made good progress! don't let a simple bio get ya down!
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 27, 2009 2:30:19 GMT -5
Name: Amaie Hatacori
Age: 27
Gender: female
Personality: Shes a very nice person but can be very flirty a times.
Bio/orgin/History: For most her life she was in Heaven but until recently she was asked to take care of a young man. When she was first sent to Earth, she had been constantly attacked during her first week there. But she has been able to stand up for herself since, and whenever the time has called for it.
Sorry......but I hope its ok (lololololol)
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