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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 26, 2009 22:47:10 GMT -5
A beautiful young woman appers, drifting across the field. Her long white dress drags lightly on the ground. The wind blows and her long blond hair moves weightlessly. Amaie walks softly across the grass. She looks up into the big dark sky sorrowfuly. The stars shine ever so softly "I dont see the reason Im here" She thinks to herself. She turns slightly to lay down on the ground. As she laid there she feels a cool breeze go across her face. The cold slightly stings her eyes and She shivers softly from the chill. She looks at the sky and the clouds move effortlessly throught the sky.
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Post by Lady Valkyrie on Aug 26, 2009 23:16:05 GMT -5
You were already placed in a class keyblader, you didn't have to post a sample. The purpose of the samples is merely for us as teachers to determine what needs immediate work, y'know. Aside from that, it's pretty good =)
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Post by keyblader110 on Aug 26, 2009 23:38:43 GMT -5
Im sorry. Im new and crazy here so please forgive me. XP
But SR told me to post that tho. XP
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Post by sugarrush on Aug 27, 2009 0:13:00 GMT -5
yep valk i did! XD i just wanted people to see what he came up with after a little teaching. ^^
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